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- Carlos
- My name is Carlos E. Maldonado-Cruz and I am originally from San German, Puerto Rico. I received my Bachelors Degree in Architecture at the University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee in 2003. Since then I have been working in an architecture firm called The Albion Group where the work is mostly retail and commercial design, although once in a while there are some fun projects too. Working in this firm helped me understand the realities of the profession and the difference between school and working in a real firm. I am a recent graduate of Master of Architecture from Boston Architectural College.
7 comments:
Your model is awesome! The introduction sheet is a great segway into the project. The image on there is one of my favorites! It gets me excited to see the rest of the project. Your layout looks nice. I can't wait to see the final post!
What about a structure plan? Is that something you are also still working on?
Along with Annie, I agree, your rendering is fantastic.
My comments have less to do with your content than your layout.
Your research, your intro and your concept are so strong graphically, with each of the images integrated with the layout.
Then you get to the plans.
because these are on a white background, they appear haphazard in relation to the rest of the layout, try and either get rid of the white with a clipping mask, or arrange them in a manner more consistent with the remainder of your layout.
(If this is what I have to gripe about, you are in pretty good shape).
Where is your second floor Plan?
Thanks for the comments guys,Annie the I don't really have any structural plan just a diagram showing the columns and floor plates. I think its self explanatory, I didn't feel the need to play engineer since I have more things to worry about. Steve, thats very true, I will try to come up with something tonight, I might just invert the black lines to white a have a black backgorund while keeping the color legend. I must've forgotten to put the 2nd floor, good thing this is a draft!
Final draft looks good. As Steve mentioned, don't forget your second floor and I'd add that the plans seem better presented individually--bigger and more clear.
Let's see the rest.
I see that I am in your model, but I am not sure what I am doing.
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